http://kendralee.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Fri, 16 Jan 2009 23:44:01 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/2008/12/19/congenital-heart-defects-the-silent-slayer-of-infants/#comment-7 jason kenny Fri, 16 Jan 2009 23:44:01 +0000 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/?p=19#comment-7 Interesting, but usual =) Interesting, but usual =)

]]> http://kendralee.wordpress.com/2008/12/31/september-12-2008/#comment-6 William Chisholm Sun, 04 Jan 2009 01:43:04 +0000 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/?p=40#comment-6 Your examples of concrete and abstract metaphors of Love are well thought out and composed to capture the true meaning of love. Your examples of concrete and abstract metaphors of Love are well thought out and composed to capture the true meaning of love.

]]> http://kendralee.wordpress.com/2008/12/19/congenital-heart-defects-the-silent-slayer-of-infants/#comment-5 kendralee Sun, 28 Dec 2008 23:04:50 +0000 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/?p=19#comment-5 Thank you for reading my essay, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Thank you for reading my essay, I’m glad you enjoyed it!

]]> http://kendralee.wordpress.com/2008/12/19/congenital-heart-defects-the-silent-slayer-of-infants/#comment-4 Gen Berube Wed, 24 Dec 2008 00:24:56 +0000 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/?p=19#comment-4 Very well done!!! My six year old son had an AVSD repair at 8 months old. He functions very well now, considering all he has been through. I find so much truth in your words. Again, great job writing this! Gen Berube Very well done!!!
My six year old son had an AVSD repair at 8 months old. He functions very well now, considering all he has been through. I find so much truth in your words. Again, great job writing this!
Gen Berube

]]> http://kendralee.wordpress.com/2008/09/25/compare-and-contrast-patrick-henry-vs-bush-speeches/#comment-2 A Katelyn Mon, 29 Sep 2008 02:01:21 +0000 http://kendralee.wordpress.com/?p=14#comment-2 Your rudimentary ideas are intriguing, but they are a bit underdeveloped. The sentence structure is bland and there should be more variation. The progression of ideas is confusing and I suggest you rethink the order; more details in your essay would help with the reader’s understanding. First person pronouns should always be omitted in a formal essay (such as “I” and “we”). There is not an introduction; there is only a plethora of confusing ideas. Some of the sentences are awkward and the grammar is not quite right. You should probably edit your paragraph(s) for grammatical errors, and misused words. Other than the problems you have the paragraphs are decent; they will be much better after you polish them up. Your rudimentary ideas are intriguing, but they are a bit underdeveloped. The sentence structure is bland and there should be more variation. The progression of ideas is confusing and I suggest you rethink the order; more details in your essay would help with the reader’s understanding. First person pronouns should always be omitted in a formal essay (such as “I” and “we”). There is not an introduction; there is only a plethora of confusing ideas. Some of the sentences are awkward and the grammar is not quite right. You should probably edit your paragraph(s) for grammatical errors, and misused words. Other than the problems you have the paragraphs are decent; they will be much better after you polish them up.

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